2-- Offer constructive criticism that would help this group. What might have been more clear? What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished? Where did you want more clarity or development? What did this group miss? Etc.
The best and most thoughtful comments will likely include information, observations, quotes, statistics, connections, questions. . . or other material from your active listening notes.
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ReplyDeleteI think that it's cool that you added that the Kymira clothing are being worn by Olympic gold medalist! I've never heard of this brand. I think it's interesting that Eerika started her own cycle wear concept at only 22 years old. I also liked your handouts! I think that you guys could have had better eye contact with us instead of reading off of the slides.
ReplyDeleteI like that you guys had a handout with types of clothing that is being used. you spoke loud and clear You guys did good with timing but I felt that a lot of things were being repeated and not a lot of new information was being given. Maybe if you guys would have chosen a career that was actual of interest to you both, you could have been more excited about the presentation.
ReplyDeleteI liked that you guys choose a brand that was a big upcoming brand, but is not well know in the United States. It showed me the options that are out there. I also found it interesting how Eerika Lenio got into her designs. I think you guys could worked on you eye contact. I feel like if you had eye contact it would he get people engaged.
ReplyDeleteI think you guys did really good on the slides.They were very informational and the handout was really nice. I wish you would have put pictures on your slides so i could see what the outfits actually looked like since you said her style is inspired by things around her.I think you both spoke confidently but could have looked up a little more.I did find your person very interesting though.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the information given about the clothing. the information given about Eerika and the opportunity and the connection with improving the clothing. Also about meeting new people. the sportswear are clinically proven and mostly used for sports. I liked the handout. i would've liked seeing more examples.
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