2-- Offer constructive criticism that would help this group. What might have been more clear? What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished? Where did you want more clarity or development? What did this group miss? Etc.
The best and most thoughtful comments will likely include information, observations, quotes, statistics, connections, questions. . . or other material from your active listening notes.
I really liked that you talked about the career you would like to be doing. It gave a more personal feel to the presentation. I thought the best part of your presentation is when you were talking about all the different people who were in the profession. One thing I think you could've explained more is the job description. I was confused on what the job actually does.
ReplyDeleteI like that you told us the most important part of a mechanical engineer. designing the car sounds a lot more fun then building it. I think it would have been interesting to maybe have some examples of cars and who designed them.
ReplyDeleteI think that this career is interesting. I know I could never do it because I'm not into all of the math and science it takes. I think it's cool that this is actually the career that you would like to do. I hope it works out for you. I think that you could have told us more about Honda and what they do there because I was confused at first.
ReplyDeleteI didn't realize how much there was to automotive engineering. It was really informational that you included everything.I think it was great that you had two people that you found information on. Maybe next time you could actually interview someone and record there own responses so its a little more personal. I think a handout would have also been nice but i did like how you connected so well with the presentation because this isn't only your dream job,but your actually going to do it.
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